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Notes from the periphery's avatar

This is great, there’s a cyberpunk vibe even if there’s none of the usual cyberpunk tech and corp tropes

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Dylan's avatar

biggest writer crush on u

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Rene's avatar

<3 this equates to fourth base

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Hai's avatar

Amazing piece. Love how you frame the choice itself between 'love or money' as a privilege many overlooked. For some, breathing is choice they have to choose, not the assumed default.

Also absolutely love the take on how everyone's a whore to their lives, whether they choose to admit it or not.

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Wren's avatar

That one doctor that’s too woke

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Rene's avatar

and that one sex worker who is going to be okay

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Kay Poyer's avatar

So beautiful and vibrant

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Rene's avatar

you commenting here is surreal

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francisco's avatar

art is alive and well.. they need to teach this in schools <3 thank you

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Rene's avatar

imagine

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Mari's avatar

Ladyboy ❤️

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Peewee Hermeneutics's avatar

You’re a crazy talented writer!

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Rene's avatar

PEEWEE!!

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Amelia Adams's avatar

"He looked like a sentient coat hanger-" I loved that. Such an interesting piece.

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petrichor's avatar

yeah absolutely no love for dr. a in this one: 'A face that would give you anal fissures if you were to sit on it.'

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Rene's avatar

think: facial overfilled syndrome

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Rene's avatar

sexology would do that to you

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Whimsy dialogue's avatar

Ugh what should I call this piece definitely saving it to re read again . Fabulous just fantastic work 🤭

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Rene's avatar

nothing makes me happier

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brielle's avatar

how do you write like this this is unreal

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Rene's avatar

i let the voices speak

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brielle's avatar

i love the quotations from both caroline polachek and pop shit lmaoo

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F.D.'s avatar
Jan 3Edited

wow this was incredible i am blown away. i feel like i just lived an entirely new life.

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nadav's avatar

ugh peak. you're so terrific

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Praew's avatar

My new obsession

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enfanterribleidiotsavantgarden's avatar

Salt of the Earth indeed, Néstor Perlongher (or maybe a Guy Hocquenghem) gone to Thailand and truly a Bataillean passion for excess and glamour as Bruce Bagemih shew us in 'Biological Exuberance: Animal Homosexuality and Natural Diversity'. How much body without organs and rogue desiring machinery reeling all this energy to all directions. Fascinating.

But, honestly, though. This can't go for longer, this is an effect of overshoot. There has to be some, in fact, a huge sacrifice of this matrist decadent self-indulgent mess age in the altar of the SUN GOD.

TOTAL TRANNY DEATH har har as the rightoids tribes says.

(Total rightoid death too, like those ifunniers present in this platform, i sometimes spy on, they are parodies of themselves, repressed Dyonisians trying to hold a frame-strong-image of them over others. Just one more Surplus Flesh, and peasants as well of the proscenial global village theater. They should accept and drown in the misery at once. Genetic dead ends.)

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Rene's avatar

i tried very hard to understand this and what i got was that

this beat is automatic, supersonic, hypnotic, funky fresh

work my body, so melodic, this beat goes right through my chest

everybody, ma and papi, came to party, grab somebody

work ya body, work ya body

let me see you one, two step.

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